11.17.2007

C.W.S.2.

[What Is This Crap? (Thomas' Bicycle)]

There had never ever been a day in Thomas' life that he had not ridden his bicycle. There was a connection between Thomas and his bicycle, they had developed a very strong friendship. But one day the strong friendship was broken.
One day, Thomas went out to his bicycle. He felt excited to ride it, he and his bicycle would have a grand adventure or something for sure. When he got to his bicycle though, Thomas was surprised. He saw another boy riding around the street, on a bicycle that looked a lot like his. It was his bicycle Thomas decided. Thomas had never been a sharing sort of person. He felt sad that his bicycle would want to ride around with someone else. He started walking home, very very sad. But just then Thomas heard a sound and turned around. Thomas' bicycle had always loved Thomas, more than any other boy or girl. The bike Thomas had seen was not his bike, his bike just liked to play games with him. Thomas was overjoyed to see his bicycle. Together, he knew he and his bicycle would have many grand adventures.
Because Thomas' bicycle was a magic bicycle that could move on it's own and talk to Thomas!

The End

[won a chocolate bar for writing the worst piece in the group]

7 comments:

Madeleine said...

i hope the chocolate bar was yummy

jonathan//garret said...

delicious. plus i got another one for guessing the most errors in the other group member's works. two chocolate bars in one day.

Madeleine said...

ah well
some good came from it then.

you still owe me three hugs by the way. and i decided that i want a really overly dramatic hug.. a sort of slow motion running towards each other, tears flowing, spinning hug. hehehehe

jonathan//garret said...

you got it! though let's try to keep the distance that we're running small, so as not to make things too too difficult. i'll see if i can't rustle up some tears...

Anonymous said...

I'm going to use this for my next English essay.

-- Harris

abpheonix said...

I know a thomas, yet odly enough I didn't envision him while this story was playing in my head.

p.s. I realized all the bikes over the years I thought were big, and even the last bike I bought, are all very small now, even though I feel I havn't grown.

Johanna just caught a tear from the sky said...

haha i actually kinda liked reading this... now i feel stupid but i thought it was cute... and in a way it kinda worked cuz i had the story all envisioned in my head...